Smitty, as you may or may not know, is a character I created who basically become the counter balance to my Turner Hahn/Frank Morales characters. Turner and Frank are the good guys. Two homicide detectives who try to follow the rules a civilized society dictates to its police force in how to handle and solve violent crimes. Smitty is just the opposite. Smitty is a hit man. And the rules he follows are his own. Neither civilization nor society have little to say in the matter.
What makes Smitty interesting . . . . well. interesting to me at least . . . is this; how do you make a dark character who is decidedly anti-social an interesting, and . . . dare we say it? . . . . a believable character who can actually generate some sympathy and affection from the reading audience?
You must admit. An interesting conundrum.
Well, anyway. Here's the short short story entitled, Sammy. Read it and tell me what you think.
She was sixteen. Sixteen and in tears. Long black hair, as black as a murder of crows, fell well past her shoulders. Her hair reflecting brightly the few shards of sunlight piercing through the fall foliage of the park's old trees. Just a child. Thin. Almost anemic. Without feminine form yet. Yet the orb of her face was young and flawless in complexion. Promising soon a beautifully exotic flower about to bloom.
He sat down on the park bench, and, with one gloved hand stretching out, deposited a worn, tattered, but much loved old teddy bear onto her lap. Startled, wiping a floodgate of streaming tears from her eyes, she stared at the scruffy looking child's toy in silence before turning to look at the man sitting beside her.
The chill of the morning air promised a hard winter. The riot of colors of the deep Fall foliage a visual feast to behold. The small park setting in the middle of a small city almost empty of human presence this early in the morning.
"This . . . this is Sammy. My toy," she whispered softly. Almost inaudibly.
"I know," the man with the dark eyes and the gloved hands of a concert pianist replied with a similar soft whisper.
"I kept it at Dad's house. The last time I saw Dad it was sitting on the dresser in my bedroom. But that's been five, six years ago. How did you get it?"
"He asked me to give it to. I promised him I would."
"You knew my Dad?"
"We were friends. At least, I considered him my friend."
"Someone broke into Dad's house last week and killed him," she whispered, eyes flooding with tears and streaking down her cheeks as she watched the dark man stand up and step in front of her. "Do you know who killed my father?"
Above her, hidden deep in the bowels of the canopy of a grand old birch tree, a robin began chirping. Behind him a squirrel leapt from a tree and began running madly across an open stretch of grass toward another tree. Paralleling the park the city street had a heavy flow of cars and trucks rumbling slowly in queue from one traffic light to another. Yet in the distance they both heard the sudden, startling, extremely loud squeal of tires screeching across hard cement. A half second later a moving mass of steel and glass traveling at a high rate of speed smashed into an immovable object of immense weight. The resulting crash generated an unbelievable explosion of noise and destruction.
The infinitely black eyes of the man glanced toward the direction from where the sound of a horrible accident had just occurred. But then the dark orbs turned back to face the young girl in front of him.
"You asked if I knew the man you killed your father. Yes, I used to. But he's no longer anyone's problem. Go home, Cindy. Go back to your mother. She needs you. Like you, she never lost her love for your father. She suffers as much as you. Go home. The two of you put this behind you. Make yourselves a new life. It's all over now. All over."
He turned and walked away, gloved hands in the pockets of the heavy blue coat he was wearing. Just walked away. Leaving her clutching to her heart with both hands the tattered, raggedy old form of an ancient teddy bear, with memories of her laughing father clouding her vision.